Monday, 2 March 2015

Bob the Man on the Moon


We have been doing lots of fantastic writing in Year 1 this week. We have been writing letters to Bob the man on the moon. 

What do you like about the letter? 
What would make it even better?
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  1. Kidimacaje3 March 2015 at 14:32

    I would make it better by writing it neat and tidy.

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  2. Hanine4 March 2015 at 15:25

    The letter would be better if they used a capital letter. I like it because it's long.

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  3. Chelsea5 March 2015 at 15:27

    How did the man get to the moon? Did he drive the rocket properly? Did he drive on the moon? Because I don't think you're allowed to vacuum the moon.

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  4. solomon8 March 2015 at 18:44

    Solomon - i like how that child write the letter but need to neat more.

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    1. Miss Binnie19 March 2015 at 18:55

      Wow! Well done for posting on the blog at home Solomon. It's great that you're telling your parents all about your learning.

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  5. Sasha m21 March 2015 at 11:51

    Your writing is very neat and careful. You used a question mark at the end of each question.

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