Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Writing about our Dream Lands

Wow! Year 1 have been doing some very impressive descriptive writing about their dream lands.




Michael Rosen was so impressed he tweeted ;

" Lovely stuff... 'dream land' ? It's where I spend several hours a day too. Maybe next time I'll see Year 1 Hill Mead there too."

Where do you like to dream? On the sofa? Up a tree? In the reading corner?
What do you dream of?

13 comments:

  1. I like their writing! It's lovely. My cake has three candles! I have white balloon and blue balloon!

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  2. I dream near my house! I dream about buying cats and dogs! I dream about my house a lot

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  3. I like to dream about me flying. Like being a bird.

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  4. I like to dream about school. About my dream land. I like my dream land. It's good writing. It's lovely writing. I like all the writing.

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  5. I want to dream about our dream lands and Disney land.

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  6. I would have a sweet shop with allllllll the sweets. Sasha

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  7. I put a road with a car and a bus!

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    1. I really liked all the different shaped windows you drew on your bus Junior.

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  8. I would have a lake for swimming. I want to learn how. (Swim)

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  9. I like the different colours in the dream land

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  10. I read in the corner. I dream about the school, and about my lovely friends and teachers.

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    1. I like to read in the reading corner aswell Deborah; it's so comfortable!

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